Reason: Author Rewrite
Comments welcome below…
Topic(s):
- Flashback confusion
- Loss of emphasis/focus on key characters, during dash cam/POV shift to Kevin (order of appearance, Escape):
- Henri
- Jocelyn
- Baby Espwa
Revised (as of post date):
Eleven months before Henri, Jocelyn, and baby Espwa set out on their voyage…
Previous:
Caribbean Sea
Northwest of Port-au-Prince, Haiti
January, 1991
Eleven months before the Haitians at sea…
The dull whine of the jet engines increases in pitch as the aging Boeing 727